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Mr. Creamy vs. Mimi the Mime 11

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I like his this page is laid out. it was oddly difficult to make though, and I do feel I could have accomplished it better with more time to work on this.

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I found this page charmingly abstract honestly; especially the composition of panel 1.
I do think if the white audience figures were more fleshed out with more humanoid-esque features, it would make a more dramatic impact on the last panel where they're all laughing at her. Otherwise, there were some other interesting bits I really liked that I hadn't noticed before, such as P&T dissipating in word fragments.